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Old 09-01-2003, 02:21 AM
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Old 09-01-2003, 02:37 AM
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very nice perody shan
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Old 09-01-2003, 05:11 AM
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very nice merey reply ka intezaar karirn
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Old 09-02-2003, 06:58 PM
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Shan, bohat acha topic chose kia hai aap nay, very nice...
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Old 09-03-2003, 12:09 AM
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magar mujhey lagta hey kah mujhey "dukhi" ash-aar sey shoroo karna chahye tha. main nain kahin parha tha kah "ye ghamon aur taklifon ka zamana hey..khushi ki gharhyan to faqat chand lamhon key liye hoti hain."
agar main koi "dukhi" shairi karta to aap logon nain bhi yahan line laga deni thi. arey common zindagi ko itna bojhal nahin banana chahye. khush rahain dosron ko khush rakhain. agar aap ki waja sey kissi key labon par halki si muskan bhi aati hey to aap nain bahot acha kaam kia......
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Old 09-03-2003, 01:32 AM
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magar mujhey lagta hey kah mujhey "dukhi" ash-aar sey shoroo karna chahye tha. main nain kahin parha tha kah "ye ghamon aur taklifon ka zamana hey..khushi ki gharhyan to faqat chand lamhon key liye hoti hain."
agar main koi "dukhi" shairi karta to aap logon nain bhi yahan line laga deni thi. arey common zindagi ko itna bojhal nahin banana chahye. khush rahain dosron ko khush rakhain. agar aap ki waja sey kissi key labon par halki si muskan bhi aati hey to aap nain bahot acha kaam kia......
achee parody dhond na, achee nazm dhond ney se kafi mushkil hota hai, ye hee waja hai ke yahan per parody kee lambee line nahin lagee hoi. waisey aap ne topic kafi acha choose kiya hai.
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Old 09-03-2003, 06:50 AM
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SHAN yahan per waqai dukhi shairi ko ziada pasand kia ja raha hai lekin tum dukhi na ho abhi mujh jaise zinda dil log mojood hain let's check this 1
JISSE PYAAR KIYA WOH ITALY CHALI GAI
JISSE DIL DIYA WOH DILLI CHALI GAI
TANG AA KAR, KHUD KUSHI KARNE KE LIYE
BIJLE KO CHUOA, TO BIJLI CHALI GAI
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Old 09-03-2003, 08:22 AM
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Irshad Irshad (Naam wala nahin shairi wala)
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Old 09-03-2003, 11:57 PM
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kia baat hey aap ki kuch aur bhi arz karain takah mehfil main kuch jaan aaye...
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Old 09-04-2003, 06:26 PM
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Thanks Shan, mazeed kuch aap key khidmat mai...
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Old 09-04-2003, 11:59 PM
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arey itni umda aap nain selection ki..zabardast..kia zoq paya hey aap nain "ye baat samajh main aai nahin"
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Old 09-05-2003, 12:06 AM
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shukria, shan hum aap ko dukhi nahi hounay daingay...
maverick aap key choice bhi achi hai...mazeed intizar rahay ga... aur yai baki Dost kidhar hain..... jaldi jaldi aajain sub log....
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nanusrat bhai! ye baat samajh main aai nahin ke aap ne itnee umda nazm kahan se dhoond lee . .....
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nanusrat bhai! ye baat samajh main aai nahin ke aap ne itnee umda nazm kahan se dhoond lee ......
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koi baat nahi shan bahi 'woh patli ho hi jaein gein'
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Old 09-05-2003, 08:40 AM
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great shan! Topic intresting hota ja raha hai....
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