khol do ...... Saadat Hasan manto ..

Discussion in 'Urdu Adab & Shayeri' started by yasminfarrukhzaad, Oct 11, 2004.

  1. yasminfarrukhzaad

    yasminfarrukhzaad New Member



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  2. yasminfarrukhzaad

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    yasminfarrukhzaad New Member

     
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  4. xtwo

    xtwo New Member

    Manto ek aise afsana nigar the jinka aur tazaat ka zindagi bhar sath raha ....
    logon ne unhen bahut tanqeed ka nishana banaya lekin ...wo jo likh gaye wo aaj classic ka darja rakhta hai ...balki unke kaam ko classic kahna unki tauheen hai kiyonki
    unke afsanon ke kirdar wo dabe kuchle log hain jinhen samj men ghalt nigah se dekha jata hai ...
    unke yahan tawayfen hai apne asli aur usee gande wujood ke sath jis gandgi men unhen rahna padta hai ...
    Manto ki tawayfen muhazzab Umraojan nahin hai ...unhen shairy aur ilmi guftgu nahin ati ....
    wo sirf gosht ke lothde hain jinhen rat din bhokhe bhediye nochte hain ...

    Aur is afsane men jo yasmin ne yahan post kiyahai ..Manto haqeeqat ki ek aisee zameen per nazar ate hain ....jahan akar dil uchal kar halq men dhadkne lagtahai ..
    jism ka ruan ruan pukar uthta hai ki agar yahi tahzeeb hai to isse aach hum tab the jab gharon men rahte the aur patiyyan pahnete the ..
    is afsane jo ye do lafz hain khol doo ye istaara hain humare muashire ke liye ...humare zahnon ke liye ..ye ek paigham hai jo ek hathaude ki tarah qaree ke dimagh par girta hai aur kuch der ke liye humaree sochne samjhne ki taqat ko salb kar leta hai ..
    jab hum apne hawas men ate hain to aapne aaspaaske khala ko dekhkar ..aur insan ki bewaqati ko dekh kar ye sochne per majboor hojatehain ki aaj bhi kitni Sakeenayen ...aur kitne Siraj humare aas paas hain aur hum kuch nahin kar rahe ..

    Manto ke is lazawal afsane ko mera salam ....
     
  5. Ratan

    Ratan New Member

    jab men metric men thi tab men ne manto ke drame perhe the aur un men se ek drama stage per perform bhi kiya tha jab hamari alwidai party thi. us ke baad aaj men ne manto ka afsana perha he .......jis ki tareef ke liye shayed men alfaaz likh bhi lon lekin wo is threer ki haqiqi daad ki tashreeh nahi ker paen ge .....jab ke ase musanif ki tehreeron per tareef ke chand bol likhna apni taraf se ek buhat haqeer si koshish kerna he jo na karen to behter he ke ham is laiq bhi nahi hen ......:)
     
  6. Ratan

    Ratan New Member

    jab men metric men thi tab men ne manto ke drame perhe the aur un men se ek drama stage per perform bhi kiya tha jab hamari alwidai party thi. us ke baad aaj men ne manto ka afsana perha he .......jis ki tareef ke liye shayed men alfaaz likh bhi lon lekin wo is threer ki haqiqi daad ki tashreeh nahi ker paen ge .....jab ke ase musanif ki tehreeron per tareef ke chand bol likhna apni taraf se ek buhat haqeer si koshish kerna he jo na karon to behter he ke men is laiq bhi nahi hon ......:)
     
  7. yasminfarrukhzaad

    yasminfarrukhzaad New Member

    Waqeyi Ratan ....Ye afsana aisa hai ki insan ki dimagh ki choolen hila deta hai ....aur Manto ka yahi kamal bhi tha ki wo seedhe dil er waar karte ....aur baqaul xtow sochne samjhne ki taqat salab kar lete the.
     
  8. numair

    numair New Member

    bhoat zaber dust hain mantoo ke afsane ap logon ko pata hii mntoo ko apnye afsanoo
    ki waja se kafi dafa adalat ja chuka haii aur jurman bhi bhra hiii
    muntoo ke kai kisye hainn main ap ko bad main sunaon gna
     
  9. Ratan

    Ratan New Member

    mantoo ke kise numair ki zubani kab sunne ko milen ge ji :confused:
     
  10. only4lovers

    only4lovers New Member

    oh yahan too bohot hi acha kam chal raha hai WOW or waqai kub soonanay ko milay gi ???
     
  11. numair

    numair New Member

    SADAT HASAN MUNTO"[/

    MAF KIJEY GA DOSTON KUCH MASROFIAT KE WAJASE MAIN AP KO MUNTO KA KISA NHIN SUNA SUKA

    "SADAT HASAN MUNTO"
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  12. zaalim

    zaalim Premium Member

  13. yasminfarrukhzaad

    yasminfarrukhzaad New Member

    Zaalim bhai ....agar koi is afsane ko delete karta to shayed main phir kabhi Urdupages pe na ati....
     
  14. numair

    numair New Member

    nhin yasmen ap kion nhin atiii urdupages per mere tu admin sahb itni thread delete ker chukain hain kainn bus
    is ka matlab hai ke main bhi na anoo kia
     
  15. zaalim

    zaalim Premium Member

    nahi yasmin sister aisi baat kyoon karti hain. meri bhi to bohat saari posts delete hoti hain. aur abhi kuch hi din pehlay ratan ke bhai dost waalay thread mein admin ne bazaat-e-khud meri post delete ki. aisi baaton ka bura nahi maantay.
    is duniya mein rehna hai to is tarah ki baaten to hongi.
    ab aisa karen ke yeh deleting waalay topic per baat na hi ki jaaye to achcha hai. kyoon ke agar abhi kisi ki nazar nahi lagi to baad mein lag jaaye gi. is liye ab chup rehna hi behtar hai.

    aur yasmin sister main aap ke adabi kaam se bohat khush hoon. aap bohat achcha kaam kar rahi hain.
     
  16. Baazauq

    Baazauq New Member

    mera objection!


    mai ek waje se "khol do" ko yahan se delete kar dene k haq me hun!
    "khol do", "kaali shalwaar", "thanda gosht"... etc. (aur chand afsano k naam yaad nahi aa rahe hain is waqt...)
    yeh chand afsano k liye urdupages.com munasib jagah nahi hai... yahan har umr ka student aata hai... aur mai nau-umron ki bhalayi k liye hi aise afsaano ko yahan pesh karne se gurez karne ko keh raha hun... warna doosri aur koi waje nahi hai...
    (aur aqir me yeh bhi yaad dila dun k mai, Manto k fans me se hun... aur unki aur un par likhi gayein saari hi kitaabein mere paas maujood hain!!)
     
  17. Faisal Azeem

    Faisal Azeem New Member

    BaZouQ Bhaye ADZ Main Baat Kerna Ziadah Munasib Thaa...Magar Main Is Afsanay Keh Rehnay Keh HaQ Main Houn...Is Afsanay Main Koi Aisi Baat Nahe Jo Kis Bhe Satah Per Ghair IkhlaQee Yaa Giri Huee Ho
     
  18. Masood

    Masood New Member

    Mujhey bhi is afsaney key mazmoon mein aisi koi baat nazar nahin aai jo mayoob samjhi jaey to phir woh kya baat hai jiski binaa par aisey delete karney ka kaha geya hai??
     
  19. Faisal Azeem

    Faisal Azeem New Member

    Is Mouzoo Per Baat Yahan Nahee Balkeh Administration Zone Main Honi Chahiay
     
  20. yasminfarrukhzaad

    yasminfarrukhzaad New Member

    Faisal bhai

    Asal men humare Admin sahab ko afsane ke do lafzon azaarband aur shalwar ....pe aitaraz hai ...kiyonki ye insani zahan per khastaur per urdupages ke naujawan aur kam umar ke membaran ke zahan per ghalat asarat murattab karte hain ....
    Meri rai hai ki Shalwar aur azarband donon per pabandee laga kar kuch aur chiz ijaad ki jaye jo fahsh na ho ....ya in ka nam badal kar ....kaddo ki bhujiya aur moong ki daal sulemani rakh do jisse kisee ke zahan per ghalt asar na pade.
     

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