Parody (Poetry)

Discussion in 'Gupshup' started by shan, Sep 1, 2003.

  1. shan

    shan New Member

  2. Sadia

    Sadia New Member

    very nice perody shan :)
     
  3. AU²TOM

    AU²TOM New Member

    good good ...

    balke gret ...
     
  4. bali

    bali New Member

    very nice merey reply ka intezaar karirn
     
  5. nanusrat

    nanusrat New Member

    Shan, bohat acha topic chose kia hai aap nay, very nice...
     
  6. shan

    shan New Member

    magar mujhey lagta hey kah mujhey "dukhi" ash-aar sey shoroo karna chahye tha. main nain kahin parha tha kah "ye ghamon aur taklifon ka zamana hey..khushi ki gharhyan to faqat chand lamhon key liye hoti hain."
    agar main koi "dukhi" shairi karta to aap logon nain bhi yahan line laga deni thi. arey common zindagi ko itna bojhal nahin banana chahye. khush rahain dosron ko khush rakhain. agar aap ki waja sey kissi key labon par halki si muskan bhi aati hey to aap nain bahot acha kaam kia......
     
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  7. barlas

    barlas New Member

    achee parody dhond na, achee nazm dhond ney se kafi mushkil hota hai, ye hee waja hai ke yahan per parody kee lambee line nahin lagee hoi. waisey aap ne topic kafi acha choose kiya hai.
     
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  8. maverick

    maverick New Member

    SHAN yahan per waqai dukhi shairi ko ziada pasand kia ja raha hai lekin tum dukhi na ho abhi mujh jaise zinda dil log mojood hain let's check this 1
    JISSE PYAAR KIYA WOH ITALY CHALI GAI
    JISSE DIL DIYA WOH DILLI CHALI GAI
    TANG AA KAR, KHUD KUSHI KARNE KE LIYE
    BIJLE KO CHUOA, TO BIJLI CHALI GAI
     
  9. shan

    shan New Member

    Irshad Irshad (Naam wala nahin shairi wala)
     
  10. nanusrat

    nanusrat New Member

    bohat khoob, ijazat hou tau mai bhi kuch arz karoun...

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  11. shan

    shan New Member

    kia baat hey aap ki kuch aur bhi arz karain takah mehfil main kuch jaan aaye...
     
  12. nanusrat

    nanusrat New Member

    Thanks Shan, mazeed kuch aap key khidmat mai...

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  13. shan

    shan New Member

    arey itni umda aap nain selection ki..zabardast..kia zoq paya hey aap nain "ye baat samajh main aai nahin"
     
  14. nanusrat

    nanusrat New Member

    shukria, shan hum aap ko dukhi nahi hounay daingay...
    maverick aap key choice bhi achi hai...mazeed intizar rahay ga... aur yai baki Dost kidhar hain..... jaldi jaldi aajain sub log....
     
  15. barlas

    barlas New Member

    nanusrat bhai! ye baat samajh main aai nahin ke aap ne itnee umda nazm kahan se dhoond lee :). .....
     
  16. barlas

    barlas New Member

    nanusrat bhai! ye baat samajh main aai nahin ke aap ne itnee umda nazm kahan se dhoond lee :)......
     
  17. shan

    shan New Member

  18. shahzi

    shahzi New Member

    koi baat nahi shan bahi 'woh patli ho hi jaein gein' :D
     
  19. shan

    shan New Member

    Allah aap ki zuban mubarak karey shahzi...
     
  20. barlas

    barlas New Member

    great shan! Topic intresting hota ja raha hai....
     

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